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aoifemannix
Aoife Mannix
Ireland

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Venice

The room is filled with light,
a clarity of morning.
Fresh radiance tumbling through a window,
the taste of blue skies.
Outside there are seagulls,
messengers from lost oceans,
they write their elegance across the breeze.

In the square the market sellers are stirring,
their silks flutter with early abandon.
A man in a cap turns and waves at me,
like we knew each other once
a very long time ago.

He is a shadow cut from memory,
his face obscured.
I am a young woman framed in a window,
nothing more, nothing less.
Before the rush of crowds,
before the onslaught of the day,
I am lightness itself.

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Sparkle Comment by: Sparkle - 2006-05-05 07:36
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I love the detail.
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Karina K Comment by: Karina K - 2005-12-29 13:17
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Beautiful description. I felt like I was in the street myself looking up at the window. Thanks for sharing.
cinesanity Comment by: cinesanity - 2005-04-25 09:53
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"i am lightness itself" is a cherished ending. A good musing over a place and a time, easily stretched by an reader to themselves, from wherever they find themselves to be.
jp meredith Comment by: jp meredith - 2005-04-21 03:04
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A perfect satori moment.
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