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mciheaustin
michelle austin
United States, florida, miami

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The American Dream P-1 The Vision

where is a place
in this world
for me

when I look
around I see

I-man transgression
global depression
monetary recession
demonic possession

wars raging
government degrading
the Almighty laws debating
the truth

the idea of freedom
for some
while others gain
theirs with gun

the fat cat'n system
always takes
its favorite dish
greed with a side conceit

brothers compete
for the same job
same women
same space

women fight
for their place
struggle against rape
and the hate
of their bodies

children starve
the street
commodity
sadism, racism
an education true
walkin around
with nothin to do

so sad
that they never knew
they were people too
went from cradle
to grave

cause no one gave
a shit about them
or our future

this is an
American romance
a systematic dance
with capitalism

1st world economy
where green and gold
reign supreme

the dream
that never comes true

when I look
around I see

the inevitable disgrace
of the human race
as it turns on itself

Offering no help
to the righteous
who reject, resist
the sins we commit
that insist and
empower change

knowing faith
must remain
if its gonna get better

this is my letter
to the powers
that be
asking

where is there
a place in your
world for me?

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chrisporter27 Comment by: chrisporter27 - 2007-06-21 15:48
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You express so much passion in your views of the world. I can feel the message. This is more than poetry, it is a truely lyrical statement. You are a natural.
GMTrimdaddy Comment by: GMTrimdaddy - 2007-06-21 12:02
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wow...this blew my mind...the lyrical nature of your poetry is amazing and the wording you use to express your feelings is unlike anything ive read before...amazing job
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