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He wasn't sure what it was
She was sure what it wasn't
He said I think it is that thing
She said your crazy it's only been a few days
He wished that the feeling would go away
She wished that she hadn't felt the same
He was open with how he felt
She hid it in her wit
He asked her 'how does love begin?'
She said 'that's easy with an L, my friend.'
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