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crackednotbroken
Identity Crisis
United States, Texas

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An enigma

Fountain of spring water

Running mountainous heights


Soft warm breezes

Startled storm's upheaval

Circle of life, no moderation


Deep blue ocean

Unpredictable break

Charming sedation


Law of Attraction

Tender, vigorous stallion

Six degrees of separation

© 2007 Nannette

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-10 19:22
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Deep and meaningful,very well put, I love it :)
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2007-08-25 22:59
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Made conspicuous by excellence.
carriedale Comment by: carriedale - 2007-06-22 09:29
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Wonderful poem..."Deep blue ocean

Unpredictable break

Charming sedation"
I think these are my favorite lines. Keep up the good work.
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