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muymia
mia hines
United States

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the devil wears Adobe.

i reprimand myself for documenting too much,
for stalling in the instilled process of dying a little.
take these photographs of lapsed time,
and attempt to frame the images of vacant sighs,
pursed lips, and crassy poses of maladjusted attraction.
all for the sake of a prosperous posterior, bleached, tucked, and burned?
when we look back, will we see the fine lines
of diluted frailty, misshaped and contorted into obligatory glamour-grins?
or just the smirk of arrogant, misused charm Photoshlopped on?
a last chance gimmick to sell yourself short.
cheap thrills are weighing us down,
and i reprimand myself for documenting the obvious.

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matt1 Comment by: matt1 - 2007-06-26 17:11
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Any time you read a poem with "prosperous posterior" in it you know it's going to be a knock-out.
GOpencyprep Comment by: GOpencyprep - 2007-06-22 15:02
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"when we look back, will we see the fine lines" - best line. "Photoshlopped" - you're solid gold. This is great. I loooourve that you're writTing so much lately. It's awesome.
Ecritelevie Comment by: Ecritelevie - 2007-06-22 12:40
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This was an awesome poem. I especially loved the title. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work
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