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Danyelle Stark
United States, CA, Rancho Cordova

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Fey

You'll find in her a forest meadow laid, with flowers braided in her hair
A simple smile on her captivating lips, her eyes drinking you in, causing
Your breath to shorten, stall even, come faster, inhale the dizzy scent
She has silk for skin and when you touch it, she sighs and sinks into you
This warmth, this haven, it's shortlived, for as she pulls away, eyes deep
With mourning, cold washes over you like waves on a shore, pulling you
Into the chilling depths, as she walks away the sun seems to shy from the
Sky and sink beneath the horizon leaving the world around you dark and
Dismal without her light, without her song, without her kiss to guide you

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HypnoAthletics Comment by: HypnoAthletics - 2007-06-22 13:38
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A fantastic tryst! I was transported into a windy wood colored variously with petals. The eyes I felt were entrancing me; the lips I imagined sparkling red with jewels for eyes and a and heat like the suns rays. The departure left me reminiscent of those glorious times I shared this fantasy with former beloveds; those lusts of the past...
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