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Edward Palmer
United States, Florida, Pompano Beach

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The Artist

Copyright Edward A. Palmer

Coming into being is tricky sometimes.
Understanding your purpose amidst all the lies.
Ideas blossom and then grow,
And then they blossom and grow some more.
When you reach above the sky and lasso figments
And see through blind eyes,
Others look, but they can't see,
What's inside this reality.
On occasion you may find one,
But seldom they are so you slump to doldrums.
There you sit,
The garden brilliant,
But there is no sun,
And your world gets turbulent.

Looking into their eyes you know,
They will never understand the happiness and sorrow,
that swirls between the back and the front
of the glass pools that watch their movements.

So tuck away what scares them deep,
And walk the path of the black sheep,
Knowing you know something else,
That others around you made you put on a shelf.
But they can't take what you know inside,
Or your being and your sense of pride,
So quiet, quiet, so quietly, reside in your world amongst the thieves.
One day when the time is right,
That will be the day that you take flight.

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jahanwisingh Comment by: jahanwisingh - 2007-09-05 17:21
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poem with a lot of realisation in it. it beautifully potrays how one's dreams, aspirations and sorrows are one's own and we have to continue this journey on earth almost alone. beautifully framed line with a lot of truth and sense
MsPsycho Comment by: MsPsycho - 2007-06-27 18:47
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I love the last two lines...nicely written.
laurasb Comment by: laurasb - 2007-06-23 13:05
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i feel emotion in this poem, which is awesome.
it would be wonderful read aloud, i feel.
keep writing:)
Sabbath Nikole Comment by: Sabbath Nikole - 2007-06-22 15:05
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I really like this. I relate to it so much. I like the rhyming scheme you've got going to. I tend to think that easy rhymes(a,b,a,b) aren't as serious. There more for the pretty types. mmm you prlly think i'm rambling about nothing. All that matters is that i think this poem is very good.
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