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almagemelas
Alma Fernandez
United States, Florida, Jacksonville

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si solo supieras

Si solo supieras cuantos te necesito
Si solo supieras lo mucho que te amo
Si solo supieras como te adoro
Si solo supieras que eres mi oro
Si solo supieras que no vivo sin ti
Si solo supieras que mi vida en ti nacĂ­
Si solo supieras que no soy nada sin tu presencia
Si solo supieras no soy nada sin tu esencia
Si solo supieras que no hay fin de mi amor
Si solo supieras cuanto me falta tu calor

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almagemelas Comment by: almagemelas - 2007-07-04 08:01
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Isi, asi mismo fue, nunca lo intendi nada de mil maneras de decirlo. Una persona cansa la mente en busca de forma de expressar los sentimientos aveces con resultados , aveces sin resultados.
RJWilliams Comment by: RJWilliams - 2007-07-04 07:04
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Isi Comment by: Isi - 2007-07-04 06:11
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Si solo supieras es el titulo perfecto para este poema porque aun cuando decimos lo que queremos que la otra persona sepa, a pesar de que lo repetimos tantas veces; tal parece que no lo saben (...o entienden).
RJWilliams Comment by: RJWilliams - 2007-06-22 19:19
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That's quite alright
zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-06-22 19:19
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I like the repetition it works well
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