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AlliciaZ
Allicia Zagar
United States, Montana, Great Falls

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My Peaceful Grave

The water laughs with merth, a siren's call

Pulls me forth, the dreams of winter realized

I run into a lover's arms and fall

To my river, where peace is crystalized



My element holds me tight, my only light

To it I belong, where else would I go

I parish without it's embrace, it's bite

My hopes and wishes, together they flow



A river's whim, only the good die young

No qualm do I feel with it's fickleness

Where speckled stars shine, glisten, on waves hung

I am safe, here to sleep would be no less



Eventually all things run together

Swirled apart and brought back to the ether

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carrietatum Comment by: carrietatum - 2008-05-07 17:06
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Wonderful. :)
Comment by: - 2007-07-01 09:07
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Really good job. You have a real talent for very descriptive poetry in very few words. I want to read more.
Robert Barlow Comment by: Robert Barlow - 2007-06-25 18:48
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Alicia, I like flow of this piece. It is very much like your last line, "swirled apart and brought back to the ether." --Robert Barlow
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