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| Nice wrap around. Simplicity is the greatest complexity. |
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Comment by: mitra - 2008-04-24 23:24
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| "unlearnt how" I like the choice of words. Nice write. |
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Comment by: rogue13 - 2007-11-05 17:32
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| I love how you made each character complete opposites, yet they are similar "Now they are friends Both a crooked heart." |
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He doesn't cry, he's unlearned how...forgets the pain w/ the love of a child...
That is some of the most beautiful writing I have ever read. Some of your other poems don't hit as deep for me, kinda skim the surface but this...wow.
Beautiful subject and well captured in very very few words. |
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Comment by: Vanya - 2007-06-24 18:36
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I like your work. I read through a few, and I like the simplicity of your words. I'll be reading more soon, when the time allows.
And thank you for your lovely comment on my poem. I see you're also a Jacksonville girl. :) |
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