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BETRAYED
As I walk these halls of Heartache,
I find that they lead
Only to doors of Despair.
A place of Sorrow.
No echoes of Laughter
Or Dreams
Once shared.
No trace of your Love
That was once
Unconditional.
A place of Pain
That is lined with Loneliness
And paved with Regrets.
I slide down the wall,
Wet with my tears,
Lost and Alone.
I miss You.
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Comment by: GLWard - 2007-07-19 21:02
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I may be reading too much into it, but there seems to be a lot of turmoil in this one. Love, pain, 'I miss you.'
Beautiful, though. |
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| To me this feels like the pain that almost becomes comfortable and can be described simply because it's become part of you. I enjoyed this :) |
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This yawns with openness... not easy to express oneself with such ease. Fraughtfully good Yvonne!
~Tony |
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| A place we have all been at one time or another. Very haunting work; you pour all of yourself into your writing, Yvonne, and it shows. |
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Comment by: dreamer - 2007-07-17 00:56
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| Wow, moving piece. I can feel the ache, and the hollow call at the end of "I miss You". I love the imagery: "I walk through these hall of Heartache". I enjoyed reading this, thanks. |
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