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draccon2000
tim kuhse
United States, Iowa, schaller

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hesitation

Here I stand, with gun in hand ready to aim and kill.
When all at once the air around is silent, cold and still.
I see my prey, he pleads with me, let me live today.
And in a flash of brilliant light my life fades away.
I don't know how this happened, yet or even quite how, but with my final dying breaths I make a solemn vow.
To live a better life next time though I know not how.
As he looks down upon my lifeless body now.

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Ecritelevie Comment by: Ecritelevie - 2007-06-22 17:53
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I loved this poem. You get your message across using a small selection of words. Thats a real sckill.

Please comment on some of my work, and thanks for sharing.
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