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Eulogy For A Bellydancer
When our visit's over and
It's time for me to leave
If you must gather to remember
For me please do not grieve
Do not enlist some hypocrite
To judge, inspire or preach
For only the All-Knowing
Has wisdom enough to teach
No Self-Appointed Guru
Will preside over my grave
My life is done, I had some fun
And it's not about being saved
Burn sage and Nag Champa
Blow pipe smoke toward the sky
Muse about the things we did
And laugh until you cry
Keep to yourselves the things you
Wish you'd said when I was here
I'll hear your words but no longer
Need to hold their comfort dear
You were rest on my journey
A comfortable place to sleep
Those who were kind I'll keep in mind
Those who were not will weep
A traveler among you
Beside you I walked this earth
A foreigner, I couldn't seem to
Make you hear anything of worth
You'll know and hear and see at
Those times you miss me most
That which seems to elude us
Finds in the heart a host
You'll hear me on the wind
Catch glimpses in a candle flame
Feel me in your cards and runes
Your soul won't be the same
So let your babies fuss and
Your children run and play
For this is life and life goes on
For years and months and days
Celebrate my return home
With bellydance and zills
Send the joyful music you make
Ringing toward the hills
Give me drums to dance me home
Remember, I like them loud!
Shimmy those hips and watch me smile
Just lift your face toward the clouds
And when the world reminds you of
How you thought I wasted my energy
Begin your dance where I left off
If you'd really remember me
Parthena Black
Copyright ©2006
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| Ohh....thank you. I'm so sorry for your loss. |
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Comment by: ymh99 - 2007-07-02 09:08
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I could just hear my daughter fairly singing these words. (She passed away last year at the age of 25) This part is my favorite:
"You'll hear me in the wind
Catch glimpses in a candle flame
feel me in your card and runes
your soul won't be the same."
This completely touched my heart.
Thank you. |
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| Thank you so much for taking the time to comment - and for getting what I am trying to express! That means a lot, as I'm sure you know as a writer. Be Blessed! |
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Very consistent flow of the meter. And written in a compassionate light.
I really like the meaning of this stanza:
No Self-Appointed Guru
Will preside over my grave
My life is done, I had some fun
And it's not about being saved
It's as if the man has a right to live with his mortality without fear of being judged by the dictates and dogma of another.
His life lived was the end of a chapter and it liberates him to see that others will continue where he left off; for others to continue living. |
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| Hi Sabrina! Thanks so much, and I like it! I have to think about "inhumane," it's a bit strong, but it may be quite accurate. I appreciate the input! |
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