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patronsaintof
Danyelle Stark
United States, CA, Rancho Cordova

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Hang me on your wall

If I could paint you a beautiful picture of my life thus far

it'd be an abstract water color
smeared in spots and blurred beyond recognition

a shaking hand would touch a wilting flower, begging it to bloom again
and against the raindrops, the wind would fight for life and death
and dying on a wide eyed girl's lips, they would kiss her one last time

and if I could paint you a beautiful picture of your life thus far
I'd leave an open canvas, with colors and brushes set to the side

and I'd smile softly, and say to you,
"this is your life, make it as beautiful as you can"

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HypnoAthletics Comment by: HypnoAthletics - 2007-07-18 13:32
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So plainly stated that ones own life is the art of the self. You have embodied a gift to us all a reminder of the beauty we possess inside and the way to share it with the world. On this open canvas, you have certainly made something as beautiful as you could. Thank you!
TheodoreReid Comment by: TheodoreReid - 2007-06-22 23:30
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i loved it. simple put i don't know how u could possible improve on this peice i think it is well written and the message came across quite clear.

thank you and please comment on my work.

keep up the imagination.
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