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Idainne
Garry Alan Nixon
United Kingdom, Manchester

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Vile Spirit

Vile lamentable spirit
Hear my cry
Your arrogance
Your bitterness
Your vile lamentable choking spirit
My tolerance can take no more

See my lantern
See my light
Look deep
Look long
Be drawn
Be drawn into it

Snap shut the door I will
Once you enter
Your new cage
Your new prison
My new light

Let your vile lamentable frowning spirit be trapped
And look out upon divine benevolence
Hereafter
Forevermore.

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wellnessthruplay Comment by: wellnessthruplay - 2006-03-14 13:26
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Nice job
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-03-03 20:56
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Interesting.. very interesting. Love the way it sounds read out loud.
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2006-02-08 00:00
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Uncompromisingly beckoning in wanton. Nice piece.
Comment by: - 2006-02-06 11:37
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This could be aimed at many people I'm sure!
It is well described and 'real'.
A sinister tone comes with it.
I liked it!
Sarlou xx
Idainne Comment by: Idainne - 2006-01-29 04:43
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Precisely or alternatively to someone who they had tried to get along with and perhaps been shunned completey or perhaps to someone who they had a lot of trust in and they had hurt them behind their back etc, the list goes on

Grr xXx
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