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Dazzling hours of senseless loosening of the spirit
Screaming to oblivion our wants and needs
Whispering to our lovers our dreams and fantasy
Lying to ourselves when all goes wrong
that life just might get better
when all along we know we have to make it happen afterall
Running through life with no sense of regret
but only for a mere moment do we feel bad
We get on with daily life
praying for the weekends to come
so we can let it all go and walk away
We are human
We are fragile
We like to pretend all is okay
We will always and forever
send our hearts into momentary madness
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I do like the way you express your thoughts, however, in my opinion, I would try to make it slightly less direct and perhaps a bit more open to interpretation. But I like the theme and the choice of words.
