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Nightmares
I lay peacefully in my darkened home.
Aware of my surroundings I listen with a mothers' intuition.
I hear the rapid pitter patter of tiny feet run across the kitchen floor.
Sobbing cries echo through the once quiet walls.
I jump out of bed, rushing to my child.
'Mama!' he cries as I scoop him up in my arms.
'It's alright, my child' I say in the sweetest of tones. 'It was just a bad dream.
He wipes away his tears and hugs me tightly around my neck.
A smile slowly appears across his face as he rests in my arms.
He knows he is safe, from the boogeyman and monsters;
All make believe creatures and fairy land trolls.
He is with his Mama and I am the keeper of all that is good in his eyes.
No bad dream will sneak past me.
I tuck him into bed; kiss him ever so lightly on his forehead and sit watch another night.
I am my sons' protector and it is up to me to keep him safe from all.
Even from nightmares.
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| I like that you use your experiences with you sons to portray in your writing. I think the best writing comes from experience. I really enjoyed it. |
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Comment by: zepol - 2007-06-24 06:59
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| Christina, I like your style. You keep it simple, interesting, and the content is excellent. When you write you are keeping everyone in mind. This is a piece everyone can relate to. Thank you for sharing. |
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| wow so that is how my mama feel about me eh? :D |
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| Very honest, relatable, and easy to read. To me it has a poem feel in the first few lines but then it reads more like a short story. Nice job describing the experience either way. |
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| Excellent! It had great meaning. Many mothers experience exactly what you wrote. |
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