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anastazija
anastazija dimitrievska
Yugoslavia, Macedonia, Kumanovo

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Is this our farewell

I can't leave you.
I've tried so many times, but it's not working.
How can the wind leave its hills, how can the sun leave the sky?
How can I leave myself?
Where's my pride and strength to fight?
They're gone, they ran away from me.
I'm alone,
Forever my land is dark.
No light in my chambers,
I slowly slip down the horizon of yours, and drown in your tears.
You cry and kill.
I die and live.
The secret is mercy, the fear is future, and the only real thing is pain.
Everything is fake, nothing is eternal.
The land of mine will soon disappear, will soon be gone, the waters are coming to sink the last survivor on my isle.
Oh, who else but me.
I could build a ship, ship of hope and love, but I was too busy watching your life slipping down the cliff.
There's no mercy this time.
The life form called you turned it's back, and went away.
Goodbye.
I wish you luck, I wish you love and happiness.
Go and leave me.
I know I must accept the slumbers and live with them, but never in them.
A person without name, home or hope.
A dead flesh of a something that once smiled.
No more smiles.
The ice froze my lips and death is kissing my eyes.
One last goodbye.
And I'll never forget the last embrace, though it was fake.
It's the last time I felt warmth.
The wind blew my hair, and the snow draw a picture of you in my memory.
Goodbye.
I didn't leave you, you left me.

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charlottescadeng Comment by: charlottescadeng - 2007-06-25 05:58
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This is great! I've written something along similar lines (which I must find. I am always losing things I wrote a long time ago).

Its very dramatic. Very vivid.
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