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counterculture
Rachel Chaffee
United States, MI, Holt

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Today's Flower Children

Today's Flower Children

I close my eyes
and see Lennon
frowning
I know he'd roll over in his grave
if he heard
our generation
was drowning

I'd be embarrassed to face
the pioneers of youth
the ones
that new how to find the truth

In protest they stood; a wall
as one
no weapons
no gun
just minds
and hands
with signs

That read: We have rights

No free speech 'zones' in '69
but that's all changed
It's changed with time
I say we step up
and protect what's yours
and what's mine

Shouldn't we be
relating, innovating?
Holding each other up?
not
Betraying and instigating
emptying our cups?

Ignorance between the ears
aren't these our glory years?

Ours rights pulled out from underneath us
the blinds closed and
curtains drawn between us

I hope you hear my words
clear
and clearer
I'm sick of looking in the mirror
knowing I can't stand
alone for our generation
it's not time for delegation
It's our job to know
to be educated
not to look back and regret we waited

Were in our prime
today's flower children
lets tell them about peace
and how to obtain it
not
tales of materialism and appearance
no more apathy
nothing tainted

It's time to speak new words
create our own from scratch
make a new dictionary
with a solid gold latch

And when you open it
A new world arises
screaming anthems
of unity
In different shapes
and sizes

even if I've never met you
you're my sister and my brother
we'll stand
In pouring rain
under
A shining new connected cover

the activists
and revolutionaries
will smile wide
when they hear our new words
and see we put ourselves aside:
To speak a new language
that captivates and unifies with ease,
when they see a generation
A generation of peace

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MikeMack Comment by: MikeMack - 2007-08-05 19:15
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unfortunately never grew up in the sixties. I would have loved to live in those contentious times. This poem gets across a sense of frustrated loss that i really think fits the content.
zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-07-30 10:20
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I was a kid during the sixties. My head is filled with both good and bad memories. I'm still a bit of an idealist. When that part of me dies so will the rest. I like your poem but it is tame. IMHO, if you're going to write about today's nonexistent flower children you should tear into them because they are for the most part corporate generated automatons. The pussy cat scratches but the TIGER TEARS. Although this is a good piece of work, I hope that next time you use your claws. If you have time please read some of my stuff. I have uploaded plenty of social commentary, some good some bad.
star romancer Comment by: star romancer - 2007-06-24 09:04
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this was pretty cool. I like the almost ignition of starting a revolution, or some form of civil disobediance. Is this a form of spoken word or bash poetry? It reads much like that.
charlie Comment by: charlie - 2007-06-24 04:46
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Hey,hey! A like-minded hippie! I'm over here, man! I've heard there are some new ones. They don't seem to have the joy and free-easyiness (sp?) we had.

Talk to me!

charlie
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