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SkylarkAberjhani
Author-Poet Aberjhani
United States, GA

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Philosophy of the Midnight Skylark in a Jazz Suite Mode

Hot rumbling notions of bittersweet blueswomen
fog elegant sidewalks with the ghosts of tears
howling saxophonic testimonies to lies
told on history''and blame placed on love.

Street lamps and big cats wear my face gently
like a mask of painted poems and nude prayers.
In a midnight skylark jazz suite mode
the downbeat climbs its way back up to clarity.

Perfumed adagios of purple lull twilight to sleep
as rivers of winged reflections wake the power of dreams.
Feather and bone unravel while tongues of song
spit overloaded gigabytes of pain exploding faith.

Stoned lions roar nuclear lyrics about the way
it used to be never coming back again. Tough shit so
truly uncool. In a midnight skylark jazz suite mode
piano sorcerers translate prophecies of angst

into silk equations of bebop equals mc/squared sublime.

by Skylarking Aberjhani
(author of I MADE MY BOY OUT OF POETRY)

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Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-09-06 21:58
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Just reread this. My attention grew with the first stanza. This is lovely, like taking us from this side with all the she-it into a bluesy ether. Very nicely done.
Comment by: - 2007-09-06 17:34
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oh yeah..
from one jazz soul to another..
incredible illustration
and use of words
some really beautiful text in there and very bluesy..
I liked it very much
Comment by: - 2007-08-11 14:38
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WOW.......this write blew me away....you're very talented.......thanks for sharing that........beautiful
Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-07-14 13:51
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Whew! You are a poet. Lines like "Feather and bone unravel while tongues of song/spit overloaded gigabytes of pain exploding faith," touch mental nerves, and "piano sorcerers translate prophecies of angst/into silk equations of bebop equals mc/squared sublime," get to the heart-head. The entirety talkin' heart.

I can't really offer you any cut-through criticism.
JoanneMitch37 Comment by: JoanneMitch37 - 2007-07-11 05:36
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Good stuff - I like the sublime musical intonation.
JM
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