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bigchris0423
Chris Fuller
United States, New jersey, Hamilton

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Lost Love

LOST LOVE
It seems like its been forever
Forever I liked you,
I tried everything to be with you
There's nothing else I can do.

I think it's about time
Time for me to move on
I thought we could have had a relationship
But now that feeling is gone

I'm getting tired of waiting
Waiting for you to like me
Now you don't have to worry
I'm finally letting you free

As much as I sit here and wait
Passing the days by
I could have had other girls
But it was just that feeling inside

The feeling is indescribable
No other girl can touch
I want to get rid of the feeling
Of loving you so much

I don't think it will happen
The feeling is way to strong
Cause when I'm with a different girl
Everything feels so wrong

Hopefully you will find him
The one that makes you glad
I don't think anyone would have loved you
As much as I had

You don't know the feeling
That I once had about you
The feeling is to strong to destroy
And there's nothing you or I can do

There will be plenty of girls in and out
In and out of my life
That I would never love like you
Except when I meet my wife

But if that girl turns out to be you
The one I put the ring on
The feeling I once had will grow so much
That this feeling is way to strong.

By: Christopher Fuller © 2006

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kjfloyd119 Comment by: kjfloyd119 - 2007-06-23 20:16
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I like the direction you are going and the emotional content of the poem. It serves its purpose. You should read works from many different poets to develop your style.
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