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charlie
jana wall
United States, ga, atlanta

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Dilantin Dream

The world says our spear is gold death
In a hot, dry desert.

Yet here you are,
Juicy as a cold green pear.

We are Ancient Rome again,
And may God have mercy
On our souls.

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charlie Comment by: charlie - 2007-06-24 19:40
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Wow! That IS a compliment! I love Jim Morrison. Thank you, counterculture!

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counterculture Comment by: counterculture - 2007-06-24 07:44
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Very Jim Morrison! (thats quite the compliment in my opinion)

BRAVO.
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