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Vanya
Joanna Ring
United States, Florida, Jacksonville

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Peaceful Dreamworld

Shake the shiny crystal
and watch the sparkled confetti fall,
Wind it up and hear
melodies chime a lullaby.
As snowflakes glint downward
in this peaceful globe, I hum
and dream of flowers
piercing purple skies.

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DamitaPerez Comment by: DamitaPerez - 2007-06-24 16:37
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I don't know why but this reminds me of that old children's movie 'The Dark Crystal'. It really drew me in for the short poem and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for the beautiful imagery.
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