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kjfloyd119
K. J. Floyd
United States, TX, San Antonio

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Trudged

I have trudged
Not trudged through, wet mud
Leaves sticking to boots, laces
Unfolding rigid with drying mud
I have trudged
Have not trudged through ruined
Carthage. Bare feet caked with drying blood
City walls falling around me
Trudging.
I have not trudged ashore
Soaking wet, coughing, trudging. I have not
Shaved a beard in Lepanto
I have trudged
Heaved no cutlass on the sodden grounds near
Waterloo.
Shot not once or twice
I have trudged,
Never through fire stormed basements
In Stalingrad,
Never been bothered by the Volga's mud
Or sniper shots, a thousand gutted alleys reeking of death
And blood.
Hither, I have trudged, but never in war.

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Ecritelevie Comment by: Ecritelevie - 2007-06-26 20:29
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This was an awesome piece. I loved how you made historical references.Keep up the good work

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Sophia Comment by: Sophia - 2007-06-26 07:35
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I know I'm just agreeing with everyone else, but I loved the historical references which give this piece a feeling of covering long distances and lots of time, a vast feeling I guess is what I'm trying to say. I love reading about history so this appeals to me.
OilsandSyntax Comment by: OilsandSyntax - 2007-06-25 16:27
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This is an amazing piece. I challenge anyone who doesn't know the historical significance to these places to look them up. Great introspection and empathy in this peice.
zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-06-25 13:45
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Excellent work. Your choice of words and Your allusion to historical events are chosen carefully appreciated. I enjoy history. I enjoy this very much. I will read more of your work and hope you have time to read more of mine.
DamitaPerez Comment by: DamitaPerez - 2007-06-24 16:30
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I like this. It reminds me of war. Through the whole thing though I kept thinking 'Where is that?' becuase I've never been out of the states. I'm just sheltered.
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