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Fafnear
Shauna Epperson
United States

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Back Seat

You see me when you look behind,
always watching with keen eyes.
And through my watching I see your flaws,
Studying like a predator on silent paws.
Again you look, and I am still there,
looking as innocent as can be.
But this is one thing I can grantee,
You will fall at the hands of innocent me.
With my victory comes your defeat,
always fear the girl, in the very back seat.

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Elise Comment by: Elise - 2007-06-25 19:53
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I'm not usually a big poetry reader, but I just love the fact that you use so much description in it, it was well done.
DamitaPerez Comment by: DamitaPerez - 2007-06-24 16:04
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Creepy... It sounds like I picked up a hitchhiker and now she's gonna kill me. It also reminded me of our roleplay in Joura. It reminded me of Kanji for a short amount of time. You better upload the Sin Fairy Story. That was hilarious.
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