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Newland Street

Now that I'm away, I thirst
for the salty Pacific, even though
it's not perfect, even though it's
murky and polluted,
and sometimes makes me sick
if I swim in it too often, or too soon
after a rain. The sand is the same,
not fine but hard and grained,
littered with trash
dull brown and speckled black;
coarse on my feet,
cold on wet winter mornings.
Here's what I mean:
There are better beaches
than yours, but I've made you mine
in all the ways that matter,
made you mine
a thousand times over
on sunny days
and rainy days,
on dangerous days
when you tossed me tumbling underwater,
on small days
when there weren't many waves
and I sat loving you between them.

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hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-04-16 06:06
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There really does seem to be some sirens call to a particular strip of beach that seems to be constantly calling to us. I have not seen mine for several years now, but even as I write this I can see it in my minds eye and hear it calling out to me.
Comment by: - 2006-03-14 07:35
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From one that lives three miles from the beach, WELL SAID...wonderful job here ! - Leah
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-02-08 18:58
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Oh hell yeah, I feel the same way.
Comment by: - 2006-01-26 14:09
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An interesting poem, with some good images of the beach thrown it. It seems like it could possibly be a metaphor for a tumoltous friendship or some type of even more intense relationship.
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