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A Cemetery Near Firenze
When the fire came
it warmed their skin
right off their bones,
baking their young muscular anatomies
as you might bake a chicken in the oven,
slow
until the ligaments
turned soft and brown,
like some makeshift cremation
stopped too soon.
And you, you who raised them
you the one that made them
stood and watched their walking
now rolling now not human
not quite alive bodies thrasing
as a fish does
against the hard metal hook
writhing and twitching
like some injured animal
turned mad by its own mortality;
and you, you stood silent
waiting for gravity
to pull them down to you.
And now, sixty years now
since our bombs buried your children
I slide across you on this train
sliding across you sixty years now
since men bled their lives
out onto you, out into you,
taking their last breaths
in your fields
before their eyes
closed like curtains
and would not be brought back up again.
My history forgot them, you see,
though I find that you did not;
you've kept them beneath you
as a mother cradles her children,
growing over their torn and broken bodies
as to keep them for yourself,
as to keep them from us
who see only skeletons.
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| This really took me there. I'm a bit lost for words. Very moving. |
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Comment by: Juliet - 2006-03-07 13:16
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| Great poem! it convery a good sense of the sadness and futility of if all. I found it quite moving. |
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| Very nice. Like the mix of close ups and long shots. |
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Comment by: - 2006-03-01 17:38
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History can be as bland as a textbook or it can draw the reader into the moment and make them shudder. Only the latter is worth the read. Your poem is not only worth reading...it should be in textbooks so that high school students
learning of this event can feel the weight of the grave past. I was captivated, disgusted, heart broken, and most imporantly reminded by your voice. You forced me to realize how brutal revenge can be no matter how justified. After reading this poem, I find myself feeling ...there is never true justification for a crime such as this....no political agenda is so important, but my political voice to stand up against it...IS! I do hope you become a journalist, for your voice is one I would trust to display brutal honesty of situations my eyes may not be able to see otherwise. I will remember your name and trust you should one day my eyes read your truth in print. Please hold fast to your integrity...you are greatly needed. |
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Comment by: seeds - 2006-02-14 18:03
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| into the depths you took me |
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