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Surprise

Your body tenses when he enters, still
like a doll stiff in your chair,
now leaning back, looking down
and not up, reading the same
eight or nine or ten words of your book
over again, forgotten again,
syllables jumping from tongue to mouth
and out like something is sleeping
and if you're too loud it's gone.
And he, excited,
leaning in from the doorway,
sees the salty taste of your skin
and his lips pressed against your body,
And you: you want to leap up,
grab him, tear him down
into the sheets
the page of your book turned
to lastnight
and his hands,
his hands
running over your hips
taking the black laced piece
you picked for him, pulling it
down your legs and off,
lost in your bed,
the soft lines of your bodies
rising and falling in the half-darkness,
making new shapes from silhouettes.

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Comment by: - 2006-05-26 08:00
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"the page of your book turned to lastnight" that was a good to lead into the night before. It was a smooth transfer. I will bookshelf this so I can remeber your transfer to make mine better. As for the poem itself i liked it, I liked it alot.
Comment by: - 2006-05-17 13:08
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Remembered passion is always sweeter with the memory. Very sensual - you really have a flair for this.
Comment by: - 2006-04-13 01:15
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cool poem , like the way you describe the scence
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-04-04 12:00
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Captures the sexual tension. Well done.
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2006-03-15 21:43
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I like sensual poems and this has the subtle tingling edgy feel of nervousness that goes along with it. Like going out on a blind date. Ooh I hate that feeling...but loved your ending! Sexy job.
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