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| This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing! |
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Comment by: Dakota - 2007-12-05 15:50
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'A faeries fear' - in the context of this - beautiful
So many gems as well as being enchanting.
I especially liked this weave - 'With intoxicating dead petals past'
Delightful. Thank you.
Have a great trip and make it back so (selfishly) you can take us on more. |
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Comment by: precar - 2007-11-19 16:38
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| Awesome imagery. The poem is tightly focused and well written. |
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| This is perfection . You wrote about something so simple and filled it with beautiful complexities . I think it was engaging and interesting ! An incredible write !! |
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When I read 'With alluring scented syrup'
my mouth actually started to water!
What are you doing to me?
Great combinations of words. I love mixtures of words
that seem to crunch and slide around in my mouth as I read them. |
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