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Dirty girl come Clean
I'm writing you letters,
that you'll never read
I'm giving you love,
that you didn't need
I'm
ashamed
of
myself
and
appalled
by your
greed
A thousand showers,
and you still can't
come clean.
The truth
in your lies
Stains your eyes,
all the fucked up things
you did to me,
that you didn't,
really,
mean.
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| Powerful emotion comes through this one, touches a cord of remembrance in me. Well done. |
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| I happened upon this poem and am so glad that I did. Your raw expression and simplicity with words were enjoyed. Good write. |
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| Stripped down and fast--no unecessary indulgence here. Much enjoyed |
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great poem with so much emotion. i loved...
A thousand showers,
and you still can't
come clean.
and...
The truth
in your lies
Stains your eyes, |
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| not a single poem I have read of yours that hasn't been filled with power ful emotions and hard hitting lines that provoke thought and inspiration for me to keep writing. I strive to write poetry as powerful as yours. |
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