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PBlakey
Philippa Blakey
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United Kingdom, North Yorkshire, Scarborough

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raking up

I feel the slowness of September,
as the days drift lackluster into early dark,
the sun lays golden, lazy now.

Here starts the rain that I remember,
and yet the wind lacks bluster, the trees not yet stark,
but the days are older, amazing how...

I lose my coldness, quell my temper,
and with some energy to muster, I must embark
upon ways bolder, than I planned somehow.

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marinarena Comment by: marinarena - 2007-06-29 16:07
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good rhythm throughout....clever title with this one
Lander Comment by: Lander Online- 2007-06-28 03:16
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Superb! Palpable.

You have really found your feet with these last few uploads. Can't wait to read more. And dare I say, they would make a great collection.
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