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kjfloyd119
K. J. Floyd
United States, TX, San Antonio

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(Charred Field)

Southeast of Ypers in Belgium was the sight of several key battles on the Western front of World War 1. Searching for beauty and a sense of normality in the war torn trenches running north from Messines village past Wytschaete village, one German soldier wrote about decorating his trench with small flower beds.


I call this my
(Charred Field)
Southeast of Ypres
Is where my (Charred Field)
Is

I live in a rat hole, we dug into this
(Charred Field)
To clean our fingernails
With rusty knives
I've even stolen from this,
(Charred Field)
The best tree tops of pines,
For the perimeter.

(Charred Field)
Yields,
Bombs, mortar, shells, shells, shells and
Death. Blood. Death.
I walk around at night.
Gathering,
Rhododendrons, box, showdrops, primroses
Flowers. Blooms. Flowers.
From a ruined chateaux
South of Ypres, in Belgium,
My (Charred Field)

I've made quite nice little flower beds
In trenches dug into my
(Charred Field)
The Canadians know nothing
Of gardening
The Australians know nothing
Of gardening
The British know nothing
Of gardening
The French know a little
About it
But no man will take these
Flower beds
Or this
(Charred Field)
That I call home.

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paulreyno Comment by: paulreyno - 2007-08-15 08:36
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A very difficult genre to write about (world war 1)that has not already been said by such great poets as Wilfred Owen. This was, however, so different it portrays a lighter side of the often described dark days of the war. The men did have to keep their minds occupied with pastimes other than killing each other. Some made ornaments out of the brass shell cases, others drew, some wrote poetry, why shouldn't a man have his own little oasis within the depressing and often oppressive environment.
Well written.
OilsandSyntax Comment by: OilsandSyntax - 2007-07-02 10:52
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Once again an extrodinary piece. You have a flare for history that is refreshing and alluring. I always enjoy my visits to your page.
DonR Comment by: DonR - 2007-06-29 13:07
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Very different, but very interesting.Surprising to me that one so young would be interested a WW1 event. Good for you
Sophia Comment by: Sophia - 2007-06-29 03:55
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This is beautiful. It's an original idea, and you've expressed it really well. I like the use of the brackets around the words Charred Field, it's as though he doesn't want to say those words, or admit that, but somehow they are there in his mind anyway. I'm not sure if that's what you were aiming for, but it's what I got from it.
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