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Pat Koch
United States, Texas, Abilene

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"All That I Am"

I am the jubilist
Revelling in merriment;
I am the costly urbanite
Laboring to pay the rent;
I am the destitute,
Helpless as the indigent;
I am the desolate,
Rambling, fateful, fervent.

I am a loving follower,
Menial and masterful,
I am a dusty replica,
An occupant of a domicile;
I am the magic eulogist,
Hedging at an enigma,
I am the sphinx and riddle,
Waward as an aria.

Garnet of a gathering,
Destiny of Hercules;
Grimacing at a grievance,
Fending off a quick-freeze.
Fortune may follow me--
Others might halt and wonder--
There is SO MUCH that I am
They could rend assunder!

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mitra Comment by: mitra - 2007-07-07 01:07
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A beautiful piece. Enjoyed looking up some words just to make sure I understood it well.
vchapmansr Comment by: vchapmansr - 2007-06-28 18:29
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Good piece. They only thing that might distract readers is your profound vocab. Some people have a weak vocab, so that might push them away. Again good. i understood it clearly
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