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It forms on the land
It takes any sand
It's quick and smooth
It can pull out a giants tooth
It destroys anything in its path!
It's the wind full of death!
People really fear it
It takes you when you sit
A twist of destruction
A wind full of suction
When people hear the name
They drop full with pain
If I tell you, you will drop
And you'll tell me I should stop
Do you really want to know?
If I tell, to hell I would go
If you insist
Then the name I will list.......
Tornado!
Oh no my little friend
It is you I should defend
The tornado is behind me
If u look you will see........!
The wind full of death!
Aaaah.........!
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You really built the suspense in this one! And you did it in a rather whimsical nursery rhyme way that really grabs the reader's attention. Your words seem better chosen in this poem that in some others. Good job.
lol scardy cat, I remember one time when a tornado was heading its direction towards my county, I got extra happy! but anyway, nice work just that I can't imagine this line:
"Aaaah.........!"
shouldn't it all be exclamation marks?
