Couldn't let day pass without commenting..
Whiteout frights pulsating spasms,
vibrating chasms round and round
Legs like jelly. yet no sounds resound,
Around my mind I find: solid lines.

As all my skin, tries to crush my soul; within
I find my body is all a quivering.
Cold sweat dripping, that keeps me shivering.

Clear the thoughts is this the end, beginning
depend on from tomorrow no longer living.
Can the surgeons skill my Heart to mend,
or will slice out the pain that never ends
Sharp concise like aortic ice this sudden shock
that's makes me rock.

Will the next breath drawn be my last,
open mouth all agape a gasp.
From this ending I escape, I ask
was only yesterday I was astonished.


When for smoking tobacco that I was Admonished,
yet I fear it was to late
As I lie here in those cruel hands of fate.
the NHS now private practise

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