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rrig16
Steve Beckler
United States

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The Lonliness of the Road

In a hotel room'¦naked. Naked. Naked. Naked. NAKED! naked. nAked. Naked. NAKED! NAKED! NAKED! Naked. nakED! Naaaaked.

The breeze feels good.

Moral: Never write while on the road and drunk.

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solaris Comment by: solaris - 2007-07-03 10:32
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:D

busted. sigh.

still, made me laugh so thankyou for the read anyway. lol
rrig16 Comment by: rrig16 - 2007-07-03 10:22
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I assum you ar b ing a smartass and got it.

SB
solaris Comment by: solaris - 2007-07-03 10:10
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is that the way they spell 'loneliness' in the states???

and i thought 'pissed as a newt' was a good old brit saying. damn
rrig16 Comment by: rrig16 - 2007-07-03 10:01
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No clever ploy or wordsmithing.....just plain hammered. May I indulge myself with a phrase from across the pond? Just pissed as a newt!
solaris Comment by: solaris - 2007-07-03 09:50
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wondered if the title was some play on Ron/Lon Silliman, or maybe you're just off the 'e's? :)

wish i'd been a fly on the wall. now, imagining this was a real event, how liberating - standing (an achievement in itself), drunk as a lord, arms out-flung e-nun-ci-a-ting so finely.. and listening to himself - the he being the narrator which amuses me to see as you.

new moral

write on the road but don't get caught with your pants down, the fine for writing on the public highway is fierce!
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