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Kristen Howe
United States, Ohio, Euclid

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Silent Treatment

Do you want to see me on my knees?
For I'm begging you [please to forgive me,
This silent treatment is killing me with impatience,
When you took my keys and left me alone.

I would die without you here with me now,
Since the silence is like a light breeze blowing,
So light from the trees on a calm day,
I can't be calm like the seas or by drinking teas too.

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Vision79 Comment by: Vision79 - 2008-08-04 14:05
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I feel this is a very personal piece. That's how you make us feel it. Good.
angelscribe Comment by: angelscribe - 2007-07-27 07:10
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Thanks Poetress.
poetress411 Comment by: poetress411 - 2007-07-13 21:22
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I feel the raw emotion of this poem... i have written a few like it... Nice!
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