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betterthandrugs
Jennifer Peng
United States, Virginia, Richmond

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artistically bleeding

bleeding

. .bleeding;

. . . .bleeding'

splashes of red anger

and bleeding hearts

against white emptiness

and dark sinister nights

dripping

. .dripping;

. . . .dripping'

crimson liquid spills

flowing and trailing;

fingertips already bloody

with lost hopes

and fairytales

staining

. .staining;

. . . .staining'

permanence etched

into skin

into heart;

into sin'

you are the knife

and

he; she; they

are

bleeding

. .bleeding;

. . . .bleeding'

internally;

perpetually;

something once so pure

someone before so kind

now'

upon ivory parchment

artistically bleeding

because of

you

. .you;

. . . .you'

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Miyazaki K Comment by: Miyazaki K - 2008-04-11 18:20
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Also very good. You have a great poetic mind.
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