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Comment by: Debby6 - 2007-09-03 12:42
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This is a powerful piece and emotional. Living this way tends to get in our heads and that seems the only way out. It isn't My ex is still in prison and has been for 8 years. Great write but painful to read. God Bless
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Comment by: Anne - 2007-08-07 10:31
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Another great poem. NIce flow and rhythm to it . You have put alot of emotion into this paoem and can feel the pain .
Nice work
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| This is excellent! Very powerful and reads very well.I can easily follow and understand the womans inner journey and emotion.It's very strong but your choice of words gives a more subtle violence to it which makes it actually more powerful. |
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It's a poem of what could have been and a powerful emotion drives it through to the end... very enjoyable read with a moral. Thumbs up Laura! :)
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| Thank you Ruthi and Tommy for your comments. I did change a few things here and there. I just couldn't change too much. This piece simply "became" from something else, so other than a word or two, I pretty much left it alone. |
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