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solaris
Jan Pengelly
United Kingdom, London

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Zoo View

a whole new world
running parallel to this
of scents and noses
tongues and
throbbing members
leashes, collars
manes, tails and fields of glory

and everyone panting -
including the dog










been doin' a bit of research, innit?

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Vision79 Comment by: Vision79 - 2008-04-14 17:50
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tee hee
niceandy Comment by: niceandy - 2007-12-07 01:29
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Fab in many ways, particularly the graphic biology of it all. Compact, exposive and punchy. A grenade of a poem.
Suzanne Comment by: Suzanne - 2007-08-30 10:28
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This is wonderful. The unselfconsciousness of animals! Throbbing members. I love it.
Harris3dgn Comment by: Harris3dgn - 2007-08-03 11:34
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Made me laugh. Don't know if you ever read the Far Side by Gary Larson before he passed away. Reminds me of a single black and white he did. "If Dogs could talk" All of them barking at a mailman yelling Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey Hey!" Good stuff.
BrindleyHD Comment by: BrindleyHD Online- 2007-07-29 07:47
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Where have I been living? Throbbing? I knew there was something wrong!
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