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Sweet sex and candy like Turkish Delight
Heady concoction of sugar and sin
Confectioner's touch caressing my skin
Dulcified ardor that I cannot fight
Tangled in taffy of lust and long limbs,
Twisted together mercilessly tight
Saccharine dancing long into the night.
Honey-rich nectar flowing from within.
Divinity dreams and candy cane wishes
Sweetest addiction that I've ever known
Licorice licks and ambrosia kisses
Treacly confect that pleases the tongue
Bittersweet taste of resplendent riches
Sweet sex and candy cannot last for long
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Seriously, I think you've nailed this one. There is probably nothing else you could do to improve this except pass out the candy to eat while we're reading. :-)
