On the Beaufort scale
Air's music of a breeze,
soft yellow, drums to green,
blue, orange, red,
purpled rage - crescendo
bowing the stubborn rowans,
volleyed rain
cracking against
battlements of stone.
Force 12, it's said,
opaque,
non-descript.
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| May I say I loved this poem soooooo much? : )You are a wonderful artist,thank u for share yr Art with us. |
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| Vivid as ever, and so true. |
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Force 12, Bucho, is a rating for hurricane, on the Beaufort scale which rates wind force from 1-12. Thanks for the appreciation.
Glad you got to it, Roy.
Thanks, Valerie, dream on whenever it's possible.
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Comment by: Valerie - 2007-07-18 07:59
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| Maybe, this is my day for dreaming, and even though you used words such as Beaufort scale, purpled rage, crescendo, volleyed rain, creaking against battlements of stones, it comes across (to me) as very romantic wording. I love the colors. Maybe it's the first two words that set the music for the storm, I don't know. It's truely wonderful writing. |
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Comment by: roy - 2007-07-16 13:39
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| aaa...i did miss your writing's milner... |
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