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anarchistbanjo
Joe Bandel
United States, MN, Pequot Lakes

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Late Summer Nights Dream

It begins, timeless
The charade of life
Goddess astride a silver stallion
Romping and singing
In the playground of my mind
Light hearted and sensuous
Behold, the sight of her
Enslaves my heart

The musical comedy goes on
Beneath the silver birch
We walk together,
Hand in hand
She hesitates
Will love conquer
The fear of a Goddess?

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Comment by: - 2007-07-23 14:17
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This is a lovely homage to the Goddess. You've created an illuminating image with few words. Nicely done. I enjoyed reading.
writer82 Comment by: writer82 - 2007-07-16 15:17
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Lines 3-8 are amazing. The poem is short, yet as powerful as an epic. This is a great read.
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