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With careful elocution
Darwin emphasized his point
'As a course of evolution
We're not swingin' 'round this joint'.
But I fail to see the reason
How so many came to think
That we went to man from monkey
When there ain't no missing link!
'It's a fact of modern science'!
In theory they impose...
White-coat intelligencia
Try to shove it up our nose.
But their notion, I ain't buying
This bananas just not chewin'
To convince me with no proof?
That would really take some doin'.
So pack up all your learnin'
We've begun the Revolution!
You regress back to the former...
And keep your stinkin' Evolution!
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Your musical ability shows in this piece. It swings and I think it could be sung, but it's not the beat that grabs me, nor the message, it's the humor. You have a wonderful sense of humor.
I love your choice of slang in this piece and love the work. I kept reading, but couldn't find a thing I would change. Loved it, thanks for the great read.
