The place for writers: Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world. Learn how other writers are doing it.
Want to comment on this Poetry? Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
while i like the ambiguity i am wondering if the colloquial change in verse three is working for or against this piece; it definitely gives it a twist and makes it interesting.
what i fear is that i am uncertain how memorable it is because of overt ambiguity. i'm afraid i'm not sure that i agree on this piece being profound. this does not mean i didn't enjoy it (by any means) but i'm always approaching with "how publishable is this?" i think it works well ironically (title in point) but it leaves me unsated. (unless that is the intent?)
A meditation with a number of interpretations from the questioning to the sublime - each according to his (or her own )religion! Millner - do you cavort with shamans?
