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ViolettePen
Sara L.
United States, MA

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Gallery of Reality

Gallery of Reality

A corridor with no corners or doors.
A train of restless, moving pictures,
telling unquestionable truths:

A sickly, barren forest,
its borders receding until they meet
and vanish forever.

A majestic bald eagle,
spreading its wings with soaring content,
free in spirit and flight.

A brother and a sister,
clutching each other, with no warm clothes,
food or shelter ' only desperate survival.

A ring of children, holding hands
of white, chocolate, and coffee hues,
as they sing and play as best friends.

Bullet-riddled buildings,
cars and conflicts exploding,
the hearts of people splintered and torn.

A tranquil summer's evening
as the sun goes down and the stars poke through,
and I lie on the grass by your side.

These and other pictures,
beautiful and ugly, simple and complex,
show what we hope for ' and what we despise.

No sugar-coated tales to lick dry.
No politically-twisted catch phrases.
This is our world in its every façade.

Innocence robbed, security shaken,
but faith is neither lost nor waning
when walking through the gallery of reality'¦

as history paints itself for all to see.

© S.E.L. 6/15/2006

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sassinmarie Comment by: sassinmarie - 2007-08-08 19:09
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Wew This is the third poem of your's that I read and you are very good.I try to shelter my three young children from the ugly part of the gallery of reality as much as possible, they are so young, so we spend our time in our own gallery, the gallery of flowers (our garden).I really like the way you write.
ViolettePen Comment by: ViolettePen - 2007-07-25 18:27
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Aria and Brighteyes: Thank you for your comments! Sorry I did not respond to them right away, but I do appreciate them very much. :)
brighteyes324 Comment by: brighteyes324 - 2007-07-20 22:17
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Beautifully written. I read through a few times; couldn't find anything I would change or that felt like an awkward read. I like how you have a stanza on beauty; and then one on ugly. Very moving work.
Aria Comment by: Aria - 2007-07-20 11:41
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i really liked how you spoke about each truth. this is a good piece and the topic is wonderful as well.
ViolettePen Comment by: ViolettePen - 2007-07-19 18:30
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Thanks! I'm going to submit this poem to an online poetry magazine soon, so I'm trying to make sure it's as good as it can possibly be.

The Shire theme?? *lol* I love LOTR, and know the exact piece you're talking about, so that made me laugh.
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