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ViolettePen
Sara L.
United States, MA

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Oceana

Oceana

Swaying
on longing tides of blue and gray,
my small ship forges ahead
with my open arms as sails,
my heart as its compass.
I need no crew -
this journey is meant only for me.
No surplus of food -
my will feeds my hunger.
My final destination -
unknown for now,
but the vision remains clear.

That familiar freckled face...
A comforting smile...
Honeyed lips...
Firm yet gentle embrace...
A presence that makes me feel at home...
They all belong to him,
the one I love.

Strangers when we first met,
now lovers for what feels like ages.
But love is sometimes wicked,
and time unpredictable,
and distance the ultimate detour.
But my eyes are set on
the sun-kissed horizon,
your softened eyes etched into the sun.

So I sail away,
the water currents pulling me your way.
I don't doubt their intentions,
for the ocean's soul is mine.
Its salty breeze is my breath.
The far-off call of the seabird, my voice.
The subtle rocking of the waves, my dance.
It moves, and I move
together
until our search is over.

© S.E.L. 4/24/06

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Aria Comment by: Aria - 2007-07-20 11:44
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this was very simple and it seemed as the woman is at peace. eventhough she is on a search for her lover, i can see her smiling on her ship on her way to find him. this was sweet. and it shows that love does overcome all obstacles.
ViolettePen Comment by: ViolettePen - 2007-07-19 18:27
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Thank you both! I'm glad you liked it so much. :)
OptimisticLiar Comment by: OptimisticLiar - 2007-07-19 18:21
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This piece is also very wonderful...the flow and description of it is flawless, and the utter simplicity makes it all the better.
:) Ah, love can inspire many things.

Determination, strength, love, perseverance, closure,
This piece is sewn with such intricate emotion! :D great job.
Bridgid Comment by: Bridgid - 2007-07-19 18:15
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I have to admit I'm not talented when it comes to poetry and I have a difficult time reading it but I do love this piece. It flowed nicely for me. Nice work.
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