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Country girl visits the city
Cherishes bits and pieces
Sights and sounds fascinating
Concentrating on one thought
She overcomes distractions
Smells in heavy winter air
Smokey factory stenches
Exhausts fuming and choking
City folks constantly moving
Harried last minute shoppers
People on every corner
Complaining about winter
Red nose and cold rosy cheeks
Delighting in falling snow
Hands burrowed in warm mittens
Skipping in Slushy puddles
Reaching her destination
Sweet aromas intertwine
Sugar plums and candy canes
Cinnamon sticks and spices
A gingerbread house so tall
Elves and reindeer at his feet
The one who makes dreams come true
Jolly old Saint Nicholas
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You have created great images in this poem. A country girls trip to a city to see St Nicholas . I like the way you have gave us an insight into her trip and all the distractions on her way ........ Great work
