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4square4life
Rachel Vaessler
United States

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The Altar of the Amazon

She cut off her breast
put it in his pocket
to worship and pleasure
her at a distance.

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nurseytonya Comment by: nurseytonya - 2008-04-04 14:09
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wow. literally giving a part of herself...intriguing. Can be taken so many ways.
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2008-02-11 13:54
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Perhaps he should cut off her head?
lospoemas Comment by: lospoemas - 2007-11-25 22:41
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Wow. That was shocking, but worthy of a few reads for sure. I'm always impressed by poets who are brave enough to write such short pieces. Wow.
DamienDread Comment by: DamienDread - 2007-07-29 09:37
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Abstract, surreal but, most of all , drenched in bitterness !!! Mmmmm, I love me some bitterness !!!
An excellent piece, darling

D.Dread
Boonrassi Comment by: Boonrassi - 2007-07-25 14:05
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yes definately.
hardcore use of 18 words man.
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