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johnny7
john sutton
Ireland, Belfast

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Early Morning Citadel

A Starling rummages through my brain for the morsels
that are not there as I watch him eat breakfast...the kitchen sink drums softly noticeable.

The edging of the compost container catches my eye,
it could have been mistaken for a flower just then;
a rose yawning against the early morning light.

Two Finches flirt amongst the rooftops as I sit here inside...watching for signs of poetry, for some movement on the pages outside.

It is raining, has been all morning as I light up another cigarette. Need to take a shower this morning, get dressed for an interview.

And as my thoughts carry me away to more pleasurable places, I try to retrace the footsteps where experience had been as light as spring summer months without anxiety...

without a troubled mind about mortality and the finiteness of everything that is incorrigably plural,
a faint sound heard when passing children playing...

Without a care in the world.

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johnny7 Comment by: johnny7 - 2007-07-24 07:26
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The fall into experience has always been of a great concern to me as we all, I think, try to regain something lost in childhood. Something that is pure and wholesome and has an eternal kiss attched to each and every new day that happens upon us at any moment before that fateful age of experience takes hold. Then time and responsibility and the need to be seen by our peers as something which is to be the Social Staus Quo
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